Master the Art of Writing Interiority & Emotionality

The number one reason readers and agents don’t fully connect with your novel isn’t what you think.


It’s not your premise. It’s not your plot. It’s not even your scene structure. And it’s definitely not about choosing more beautiful words.


What it really comes down to is something most writers aren’t intentionally trained to use: interiority and emotionality.


Interiority is what allows readers to step inside your protagonist’s mind—to experience their thoughts, reactions, memories, and meaning-making in real time. It’s the bridge that transforms a story from something we observe into something that moves us.


And emotionality? It’s not about telling us what the character is feeling. It’s about using interiority, language, and context to create an emotional experience in the reader.


In this immersive 3-day experience, you will learn exactly how to use interiority to pull readers into your protagonist’s mind and create emotional impact that lingers long after the scene ends.


In this class, we go deep into what interiority actually is (and isn’t), breaking it down into clear, usable layers so you can see exactly how it functions on the page. You’ll explore concrete examples, then move beyond theory into application—because understanding isn’t enough. You need to use it.


You’ll practice adding interiority to scenes, experiment with techniques that deepen reader connection, and begin to understand how emotionality emerges naturally when interiority is working well.


This is a highly interactive, hands-on experience. Yes, there’s powerful craft discussion, but there’s just as much real-time practice, exploration, and space to ask questions. You’ll be working alongside other writers, actively applying what you’re learning so it sticks.


By the end, you won’t just understand interiority and emotionality as abstract concepts—you’ll know how to bring them onto the page in a way that makes readers feel something real.



49 Lessons

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Day 1: Sunday, June 7th 2026

Link to Day 1 (LIVE)

Day 1 Slides

Video 1: Hello & Welcome

Video 2: What is Interiority?

Video 3: Debunking Interiority Myths

Video 4: The Four Layers of Interiority

Video 5: Identifying Interiority

Video 6: Video 6: 5 Methods for Putting Interiority on the Page

Video 7: Curating Interiority

Video 8: Practice Adding Interiority to Charlie Scene

Method 4: Example Scene 1 (Sunrise On The Reaping)

Method 4: Example Scene 2 (A Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes)

Method 5: Example Scene 3 (Listen To Your Sister)

Method 5: Example Scene 4 (Murder Takes a Vacation)

Homework: Charlie Practice Scene

Using this backstory to inform that backstory you add to the practice scene!

Charlie Scene BACKSTORY

Day 2: Sunday, June 14th 2026

Link to Day 2 (LIVE)

Day 2 Slides

Video 1: Day 1 Review

Video 2: Practice Identifying Interiority

Practice #1 Identifying Interiority

KEY Practice #1 Identifying Interiority

Practice #2 Identifying Interiority

KEY Practice #2 Identifying Interiority

Video 3: Review of Week 1 Homework (Charlie Scene)

Video 4: Decisions, Story Logic, and Interiority

Story Logic Example #1

Story Logic Example #3

Story Logic Example #4

Video 5: A "Clever" Protagonist

Clever Protagonist Example #1

Video 6: Backstory & Worlding as Interiority

Example #1 Backstory & Worldbuilding

Example #2 Backstory & Worldbuilding Backstory & Worldbuilding Example #2

Video 7: Explanation of Homework

Homework: Improving Backstory & Worldbuilding

Day 3: Sunday, June 21st 2026

Link to Day 3 (LIVE)

Day 3 Slides

Video 1: Interiority Review

Video 2: Review of Week 2 Homework

Video 3: What Is Emotionality + Guidelines

Video 4: Example of Emotionality in Bestselling Novels

Video 5: The "Outside In" Method for Creating Emotionality + Student Examples

Emotionality Example 1: Sunrise on the Reaping

Emotionality Example 2: Deathly Hallows

Emotionality Example 3: In Another Country

Emotionality Example 4: Doctor Sleep

Emotionality Example 5: 11/22/63

Practice: Adding Emotionality Scene Beat